My group thought the story, message and feel of my movie was right, but did have some suggestions.
- Slow down my text in the beginning that says “Asian American”
- Work on some working of sentences.
- Some of the opacity transitions aren’t quite on. Have to play around with them.
- Make the ball or ‘ball like’ at the end. Have it bounce or something.
Overall...
Organization-Good, understandable
Content/Story- Good
Infographics- When 100 men come up on screen I can play with it.
Understandable- Good
Redundancy- Bring back the bouncing of the ball.
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